awesome

First time reading this story today, and I really enjoyed it. Of course SuperSEAL would save Danny, even carry him up a mountain, with injuries of his own. I love it!

Great story! Just ran across it and it immediately caught my attention. Love the thought of Danny and Steve injured and in a jungle. They are my favorite guys and I always love their friendship, care and concern for each other. Thank you! Hope to read more from you!

yes. love this, so much. ;) gotta love SuperSEAL Steve, and i absolutely love Steve Danno's friendship - this portrayed it perfectly, i gotta say. :D well done! x

You should make this story...1 of many in a line...sorta like every story has Steven hurt and he still ends up rescuing someone else...just different circumstances...your writing is really amazing by the way...it flows very nicely and the different ways you describe what people are feeling is extremely impressive. Again I really hope you make another story like this

Really enjoyed this awsome job ;)

The relationship between Steve and Danny is to be cherished.

This is a fine story of grit and determination.

Kudos to your Muse.

Wow, great story!

A wonderful read.. Loved all the details! Great write!

Loved this thanks hon. Steve, the super SEAL indeed! Anyone else would have been on the ground crying but not our boy...he just made sure he got Danny and him top a safe enough point for rescue withouth allowing his injuries ot get in the way! Super stoic heroic SEAL at his best. Nice team scene at the end as well.

Thanks for this hon!

Oh man, this story is fantastic. Love Steve!Whump and even more a stoic Steve!

Very tense story. Well done.

I really enjoyed your whump story. You certainly fulfilled the prompt requirements with some mighty fine and well written Steve heroics. Thanks for sharing.

can't imagine danny jumping out of a plane...

steve can really use his training now, don't want to imagine hanging on that parachute...

i'm actually amazed what steve carries around in his pockets ;)

great story!

Is Danny serious? Palling around with Super SEAL, he better damn well take him up on that offer, did he forget the Chinese Freighter ship? Or the time they needed to give chase to Wo Fat's escaping boat? If I know Steve McGarrett and Danny does too, there will be a time when Danny will need to jump out of an airplane again. So he might as well do it when all is clam.

Lol. Cute story, I love these two so much.

Would love to read a part 2 to this amazing story.