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shadewatcher chapter 1 . 4/29/2014 Sqweeee! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! The only one you forgot to mention was Minion. But otherwise i soo do love this happy ending. _ |
Nora Salisbury chapter 1 . 2/26/2014 A lovely story! It was a bit hard to get through, however, you really need a GOOD beta to fix the many spelling errors. But, the content makes it worth the effort. Great descriptions of alternate genitalia/lovemaking techniques! If you'd like someone to have a hand at fixing it up I could give it a whirl, it would take quite a while to do well but I'd be willing to do my best. If not it's OK, and no offense intended. Thanks for sharing with us! Dreamworks won't give us more so we have to make our own. :) |
ChrisCline chapter 1 . 6/15/2012 I avoided reading this story due to the super model part but now I'm glad I took a chance on it. As the other reviewer mentioned, if you took the time to clean up the spelling and section breaks it would be more enjoyable for the reader. But I liked your story and I think you gave a nice take on this storyline. I hope you are still writing! |
myps2hd chapter 1 . 5/7/2012 This is such a wonderful story. I have read more than a hundred with Megamind and I think this is my favorite. Funny, sexy, pulls at the heart strings... I just couldn't stop reading. I love when an author can make laugh out loud and I laughed a lot. You have an incredible imagination and gifted at having several different elements come together so smoothly. Thank you so much for sharing your work. I hope to see more. |
Phenixia Sama chapter 1 . 5/5/2012 It was a really interesting story. It was a bit long, but I prefer oneshot to many chapters. The mature situation was great and the jokes were funny (especialy the tree and the blue moon ones). As funny and entertaining as it was, it was also a pain to read. There are so many spelling errors (missing letters or capitals) that it disturbed the concentration. Also, there are no lines to indicate that the story is changing /place/time/event. It breaks the rythm of the story to understand what is happening between a line and another. So if you want more readers and reviews, just correct those 2 points and people will like it even more. |