| Reviews for A Garden on the Roof |
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Mary Mab chapter 32 . 9/8/2014 Wow that was really good and I really liked... I... No words to describe what I am feeling and the video is beautiful so thank you... Again gear story and no more from me ;p ;) ;p |
Backgammon chapter 32 . 9/7/2014 Thank you. There are so few stories that value Sam and in which he finds love, I was happy to find this one. Also enjoyed your take on Dean's near-epic levels of rage, lust, pride, and gluttony being a 7 deadly sins "virus" from hell. |
klu chapter 31 . 8/21/2014 This was a really great crossover; I loved how you meshed the two worlds and didn't get bogged down in the contradicting lore or try to over-explain the various discrepancies between the shows. I honestly loved the Dawn character, but think the way you used her unnatural existence for a 'greater good' and purpose of grand design was very well thought out and have her life more purpose than just 'living happily ever after' could have ever done. Bringing Sam back to only lose him right away was a bit of a slap; but the story arc was amazing with the concepts you introduced, like bits of Hell hanging on and corrupting someone (I am over simplifying, I know). It makes sense that Buffy would be more prone to be infected with 'pride', while Dean was suffering with 'lust' and 'envy' and 'lust'. It was all so meticulously thought out, intricate concepts and yet not convoluted; VERY well done. I didn't write this review right away; I couldn't wait to read the next story. But this was terrific. Thanks for writing. (The second one was great too, and I do hope you decide to finish the 3rd one so I can read it also!) |
klu chapter 11 . 8/21/2014 The chilling thought Sam had of Buffy in the previous chapter when he realized she was the 'Buffy' who would 'step over his corpse to get to her sister' was being echoed so clearly here when Buffy vowed to herself she'd get to Dawn 'no matter what bodies she had to crawl over to get to her.' You did an amazing job with all that imagery and proving Buffy's determination. You brought that full circle and it really worked well. BTW: I genuinely didn't see Sam's jumping into the gate and leaving Buffy behind; that took me by surprise. |
klu chapter 2 . 8/21/2014 I am really liking how this is starting out. Except for the whole 'cute one and tall one' thing. Sam's plenty 'cute' too... Could have been 'pretty' one and tall one... Anyway... I think the idea that Sam would be willing to help someone save a sibling when he was unable to save Dean is a great way to bring him together with the Scoobies... His sense of duty to help others would win out even if he'd left Buffy's house initially. However, the idea that they can help him get Dean back is even more incentive. I'm guessing Willow's 'witch-ness' might be a bit of an issue until he understands it a bit better, since all the witches he's come across are inherently evil and ruled or powered by demons. |
Deangirlforlife chapter 32 . 6/9/2014 Jane your a dumb bitch! And your youtube videos are retared! And your friends are dumb too! Your fics are are lame and boring! Bye trolls! |
Deangirlforlife chapter 1 . 6/9/2014 This fic sucked and buffy is ugly and dumb! |
spk chapter 31 . 2/25/2014 WOW! Amazing tale. Loved every minute of it. The only question I'm left with is...what was in the box that Buffy was just given? :) |
mfaerie32 chapter 31 . 9/27/2013 What was in the box? Do we find out in the sequel? Loved the story. You almost list me with Buffy almost cheating on Sam...so I'm glad there was a reason. |
brebre99 chapter 9 . 7/11/2013 This is awesome |
stacynn chapter 32 . 3/21/2013 Ok what was in the box, LOL? I feel like I should know but I don't! Loved this very much. Am a huge Buffy/SPN fan and this was just great way to merge the two. Very vivid details and your characters were spot on. Thank you! |
stacynn chapter 4 . 3/20/2013 omg this is soooooo good! |
Lilly Emerald chapter 1 . 2/15/2013 hello! You know me as Buffyfan on youtube. This is a great begining to a story and i just love Buffy crossovers so it's an added bonus! I like how you write the characters so realistically and make it seem like I'm watching it on TV. I love your trailer for this fic by the way...it should be having way more reviews! |
JPElles chapter 32 . 2/8/2013 I look forward to it. Anticipating what you come up with eagerly. |
keptinkirk chapter 31 . 1/14/2013 Wow. This was amazing. And the end... for now? That makes me happy:) |