Reviews for The Lost City
Alana-kittychan chapter 1 . 3/13/2016
Awesome story hope to read more
Alana-kittychan chapter 5 . 3/3/2016
Aw what an awesome story, hope prowl finds Jazz
theoHIangurl chapter 5 . 11/13/2015
This is an awesome story.i love the suspense and the p/j fluff. Mirage is in for a little surprise.i cant wait to find out what happens next!please update soon:)
Anonymus chapter 5 . 6/2/2015
This is like the Lost City of Atlantis except more Transformer-ish. :D
Please update soon!
Dark Reika chapter 5 . 8/5/2014
.GOD!
Your story is wonderfull and very facinating. I truly hope you intend to continue and finish the story.
It would be an absolutely shame if it gets forgotten and stays unfinished! .
Please update soon

Reika
Crazygrrl XD chapter 5 . 7/22/2013
Oh PRIMUS, I love this so much! It's beautiful and amazing, and I'm excited to find out what happens next! The way you write makes me really fall in love with the characters, and hope Prowl and Jazz find each other. I'm also curious to see how Mirage will play out into all of this. I hope you haven't abandoned this fic! Please update soon! :)
Daklog73 chapter 4 . 10/16/2012
Aww...this is really cute! I'm happy that I found it!

Looking forward to an update! Can't wait for Prowl to find Jazz...and for Jazz to tell Prime that Prowl is looking for the city!
WolvesFire77 chapter 4 . 10/16/2012
I can't...ahhhh! I can't believe you updated this!
I love this one so so soooo much. I know I say that often but yours is one of the ones I've got an individual app for on my phone. I check it every now and again to see if you update and you did! Late review but still!
I'm so glad you updated.
Your Prowl just has a sense of sparkling curiosity that's addicting. Jazz in himself is a whole other addiction. The story as a whole is dangerous simply because once you start reading your hooked!
I'm not sure I can find the right words to describe my fascination with this story so I'll just leave this little review with you.
Keep up the awesome work and I can't wait for the next update! :D
IBrokeThe4thWall chapter 4 . 10/16/2012
Thank the fanfiction muses! Words cannot describe how happy I am that you updated! A good flashback and a little foreshadowing will go a long way in getting someone hooked on a story ;) And the weird thing is, I was actually thinking about the ship's name, Xantium, when I was coming out of a Target.

Awww snap, Mirage is in charge! The twins are gonna die XD

Follow your spark, Prowl, no matter how cliche people think you sound!

So Bee is also a means of being found by the Kaelexians? Sweet. Everyone loves that scout.
Guest chapter 4 . 10/15/2012
Great chapter! :) I like the mystery surrounding why the replacement scout didn't show up, why Mirage wants the information, and what will happen - when/if the Twins give the info up, when/if Wheeljack and Bluestreak meet up again... Oh, I am looking forward to more! :)
Stargazer at Moonlight chapter 3 . 8/1/2012
Oh man. The twins will forever be a thorn in Prowl's side, won't they? I kind of hope that Jazz sets them straight. There has to be a story behind Wheeljack's knowledge of what spark synch feels like. He's actually able to concentrate enough that things don't go 'BOOM' either? Awesomeness!

This seems like some kind of story that I've read at some point. A Sherrilyn Kenyon romance novel, I think. Not that it's overly familiar, just sort of. Random, yes.

The whole concept for this is interesting, especially as Prowl is the one that is searching for Jazz. Please continue as soon as you can.
IBrokeThe4thWall chapter 3 . 5/17/2012
I love it! The romance builds, the expedition team has gathered, this is excellent!

Update when you can :)
Thalanee chapter 2 . 5/9/2012
I've read and reread this chapter several times now and let me tell you it's perfect!

I'm very much looking forward to seeing where you will go with this story.
IBrokeThe4thWall chapter 2 . 5/8/2012
*squeals* This is awesome! Surprised with the Twins, but I love it! Doting Ratchet's funny. Love Prowl and Jazz's spark presence meetings.
IBrokeThe4thWall chapter 1 . 5/3/2012
You have to continue this story, it sounds too cool! And you don't even need a name for the Lost City, it could be so old that everyone forgot what it was originally called.
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