I have come back to read this chapter more times than I can count because it’s so beautifully written. It’s always absolutely breathtaking.

Okay um its been quite a while since this has been posted, so I don't know if anyone will see this. I literally never leave comments on anything, but this is the best story I've read. Its like a fairytale, but a really damn painful fairytale. I love the characters, i love the plot, i love the parallels in the story. This is honestly amazing.

I literally started ugly crying when Loki essentially killed Rosa

Is the witch story another original one of your? I was fascinating and creepy!

Im. Just. Gaping...

Oh! He's gonna tell all of Asgard I'm so excited!

Ooooh oooh ooooooh!
They were lovey-doveying!

So cute!

This is so beautiful
I'm obsessed with Loki too and I ADORE stories about the stars
and I almost cried when she was
reading the book to him!
I LOVE this story already
This is very promising
And very nice work!

I finished the story yesterday and it's one of the best stories I've read

Fuck I've never hated and liked a story more than this one. It's just one bad thing after another. And I fucking love it

sooooo you promised mind reading!

I forgot how this story was brilliantly written. Well done.

A única parte ruim da história é que ela acaba
Parabéns pelo grande trabalho

I have only just started reading and I cannot seem to stop, it's so well written and such an amazing story. Thank you for this story.