Wow I love the chapter.

I love it! I really wish you would continue with it though!

how about a continuation?

Would be fun to read and watch ne hahahaha

Finally, another RenjixOrihime! I've read them all, some bad some good, but this is great! Nice opening so far, so I wish to see more! Good luck on your next chapter!

Lolita-love,

Lolita-chan.

It was really sweet i liked it :) really nice alittle awkward but i think that is what makes it right..if that makes sense

TT This reminded me of "No More Words" by Ayumi Hamasaki. That song is completely appropriate for this. You should write more Renhime, because this was entirely too sweet.

Yes Orihime you set your goals for someone else! Nice job, I really like this pairing. I thought this came out really well!

omg i love it. please dont make it into a one-shot, please continue. I would love orihime trying to win over Renji and renji trying to hide his feelings for orihime. I also want those ichiruki couple to regret what they did