*Part two of chapter three coming soon...*
Me sitting here 16 years later :

I really hope you haven't given up on this! I would like to know what happens! Please update soon!

very, very good story. I really like those two Jedi that dies, they had really interesting personalities. I love your writing style. And I think I've cought on to Obi-Wan's "hairbrained scheme" *snickers* let's just hope this works out better than the trip to the relearning center.

Very nice! I wish I'd known when I started it that it wasn't finished, though.

I hope you will come back to this story. You are a very good writer. I don't see many Obi Wan/Anakin stories and very few indeed that are this good. Have you written anything else?

-pokey1984

I can't wait to see what happens next!

You nknow what I'm aking you next- WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE YOUR ROBOTECH STORY?

Hey Great story i really liked it and i cant wait till you write the next chapter

more please

interesting so far. good job. please continue as soon as posible

A nice chapter, but if you want to folloe Jedi quest you've got a problem. Sirir's padwan is a boy named Ferus Olin and he's just two years older than Anakin. I like Yoda helpining Obi-wan and Anakin.

:O! OMG! SIRI AND OBI? WHOO! I love this fic...will there be more angst?

Wonderful work. I look forward to the next chapter.

Don't stop there! Plz continue!

sh*t! thats was so grate write more

WOW

Niiiiice... I'm envious: you write darn well.