| Reviews for The Rise of One |
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maya chapter 26 . 6/20 i really like how you gave zuko the ability to bend lightning while still keeping this ability in check with his character (if I remember correctly, he only uses it as a last resort to spare a painful death, like he's trying to separate himself from Azula). |
maya chapter 24 . 6/20 of course you did that bowen *rolls eyes and sighs* |
maya chapter 17 . 6/20 why do I feel like Katara is going to end up doing something stupid as a mentor to get Zuko sponsors or something... |
maya chapter 14 . 6/20 OMG THE CACTUS JUICE AHAHAHAHA |
mia chapter 7 . 6/19 I feel like Pakku definitely fell for one of his fellow competitors and either watched them die or killed them himself in order to understand what Katara's feeling |
Aiedail4eva chapter 27 . 4/23 Still loving re-reading this story, and I can’t wait to finally finish it with the next installment! I’ll be finishing reading this story when I literally first read TBG in like 2014... hey we ended up here eventually! I’m so glad that you did finish this story, thank you so much for all the time and heart you put into it. It’s been so nostalgic reading it again. Some parts I had forgotten, and it was so fun reading them and enjoying this story all over again. I can’t even remember if I read any/much of the third installment, so I’m so excited to finally see how this story ends. Again thank you! -Xoxo |
thespeedfxrce chapter 27 . 3/28 I don’t believe I mentioned this before, but I love that Zuko has her mother’s pendant on his wrist. Gets me all giddy inside when you mention it. I am excited and nervous to start the final book in this series of yours. I didn’t make the connection until now that you wrote one of my favorite fics, the Swan Princess one that I forgot the title of but it’s based around that one song - damn good story. I’m not sure I’ll ever be ready for the final leg of this journey you’ve sent us on. The nature of THG is brutal and there isn’t a lot of room for happy endings. I trust you will do us justice. |
thespeedfxrce chapter 26 . 3/28 I’ve got a bad feeling Ozai isn’t going to like the sacrifice or show they put on. |
thespeedfxrce chapter 24 . 3/27 I think it’s due time for me to recognize a real one... Joo Dee’s character is funny, entertaining and likable - even for Capital Scum ;) I do think it’s sad Katara keeps asking Bowen not to kill Zuko, but never asks Zuko not to kill Bowen. That’s gotta be a kick in the gut every time. |
thespeedfxrce chapter 23 . 3/27 The bison whistle reminds me of Chekhov’s gun. You’ve made a point to showcase it, even if just in passing, the last few chapters. |
thespeedfxrce chapter 21 . 3/26 I love me some angsts fluff. And I love Bowen parallels with Finnick and Annie (forgot if that’s her name, been a while since I read the books) |
thespeedfxrce chapter 20 . 3/26 I am disappointed in Katara for not trying harder to establish sponsors. She kept saying she had to focus on them and try but she failed in every instance or simply didn’t try at all. Definitely shows her pride and some of her weaknesses, I love Katara but that was something that pissed me off about Katniss and I don’t love seeing it in her. But it makes for a juicy story and stress with lack of sponsors. The plot must go on! I’m getting really annoyed with some of your reviewers shaming smut though. Like the shaming is so gross to me, idk. I think if you wanna write it or read it, do it. This is totally non-consequential for me to bring up, I know, and I didn’t come to this story for that kind of stuff but it just irritates me. The comment at the end of this chapter about authors using it to show love just reeks to me cause like... people in love have sex, kiddo. Idk why I brought it up I just felt annoyed and - even though I wasn’t expecting smut in this story - I felt shamed for having read it. Big yikes to those reviewers. Anyways love this u’re amazing and perfect |
thespeedfxrce chapter 18 . 3/26 I am very excited to see where this path takes us. I love learning the behind the scenes tasks the mentors have. It’s something I wish we saw more of in THG so I’m more than pleased to see it happening now. This would certainly make for a boring book, but I can’t help but think if I was in Hama’s position, I’d stop Fire Lord Ozai’s heart, consequences be damned. Make it took like a heart attack or maybe cause an aneurism. Ozai wouldn’t be a martyr then, just a victim of circumstance. It can happen to anyone, after all. Boring book, but it’s what I would have done. It’s untraceable. That being said, can’t wait for Hama to fuck up some tributes. |
thespeedfxrce chapter 17 . 3/26 I knew Hama would volunteer and I can’t decide if I’m relieved or devastated to hear it. The moment she said everything would be okay, I knew but also wanted to pretend it wasn’t what I thought. But I am interested in seeing how Katara blows these games into smithereens from the back end. |
thespeedfxrce chapter 16 . 3/26 I loved June’s costume! |