Nami is not a virgin ,why would you write that at that point ,you completely killed it dead ,the fact they are both virgins is what is endearing about the whole LuNa this is just a bullshit cringe story.

ty for the story it was beautiful

woah I love love love the plot ? like yes grown ass luffy pulling the captain out of him

this was a really meaningful chapter honestly idk how these hoes sleep and act so carefree so I love too see the struggle

the way I screamed when she immediately told zoro lmao

Why did you write that she’s not a virgin ,by any means ,made her sound like a slut

First chapter and already sanji is an issue , sigh

Omg! I just read this in one sitting and it’s everything I’ve ever wanted out of a LuNa fic. It’s amazing, thank you.

too cute!

This would be interesting to read in Luffy's POV. I love this story so much it’s always the first thing I read when I want a fluffy LuNa fic 3

This is probably one of the best Luffy x Nami fics I have ever read. Kudos to the writer!

So cute! I love the characterization of the crew, and the dynamic between everyone. You conveyed the romance without losing or sacrificing that. Plus the romance between nami and luffy felt very natural. I really liked the conversation they had in his room where he expressed his concern for her. It was genuine and the romance was clearly there beneath the surface, but it wasn’t overdone. Loved it!

Was good, really enjoyed this fic!

this was absolutely adorable and sweet, it made my heart swell to at least three times it's normal size. thank you for sharing!

Sir/mam that was very beautiful and had a nice but corny end