WTF DUDE, YOU CAN'T JUST DO THAT. YOU CAN'T END A STORY LIKE THAT, that's mean ;-;
Now I'm all hyped up and stuff and you just CUT it off!?

Great story.

NEED MORE!

(pls ;-;)

Awesome...

Please Write another!
it was amazing, you had me captivated with how you told the story!
you have a real talent :D!

Can you continue it please

Nice and satisfying ending. Stole my heart away

Thank you for bringing a close to this great anime. You surely answered some of my wishes as I'm saddened by the death of the original author. I hope you can write another sequel that just shows the magical world to Saito's parents and wherein everything can finally be accepted by everyone and be brought to a final closure.

Oh wow, you have not even received 1 review.. I feel bad for you man, great writing. Absolutely loved it, totally fits the story.

Thank you.

What a great story!

the anime was simply awesome. this story that u have written is amazing...not a better ending i suppose. i also imagined that if saito was to ever return to japan he would face trouble from the govt and u just made a story out of it...AMAZING!

I like the idea of this chapter, om probably not the only one who want's anouther chapter.

Damn turn this into an anime pls

Thank you i didnt read it yet but if i type in zero no tsukaima doujinshi hentai pops up and this this is long so thank u 4 being here and prob waste 4 hours of my life on entertainment and. a AWESOME conclusion... I expect great things from you so u better conceive

It was pretty nice written. I would Loe to read some more ;D

Love this so much! i hope you make this multichapter

Nice work! You could make a season 5 of zero no tsukaima but i dont think you are going to do that.
10/10 for the story.