Awesome story I love it so far please continue!

I loved it please update more

1. Grimmjow! X3

2. Yes, it was obvious from the start. -_-

3. :3...

Oh ironically Grimm is my fave. XD

answer to random question 1 Grimmjow!

answer to random question 2 Nope

Sometimes, it's better not to have so many P.O.V shifts. :3 Also, please use the horizontal line to separate the Author's Notes and P.O.V shifts. :3

Omfg Shiro time!

Eep! I'm eager to know who that little mystery person is! :3

YAY! X3

Here are some errors:

1. "Unfortunately Ryen, you will have to undergo training since you will join us "Unfortunately Ichigo, you will have to undergo training since you will join us.

2. He just rid of the grunts using street fighting. He just got rid of the grunts using street fighting.

Nuuuu! Don't hurt Ichi and family! D:

I still say you should keep it up. :3 All you have to do is replace the chapters. X3 Or if you truly want to remove this story, maybe you could write a new story someday. :3

DON'T DELETE IT! I like a lot!

Oh maybe you can change the summary of this one and keep going with the plot that's going on this story

and then create a new story with the similar summary that has it as a school fic and the way you wanted it to be! :3

Am I confusing you?

i wants more~! this is fun!

Errow! :3 I just wanted to say that there were a few grammatical errors, but they weren't too bad. :3 Although, I would like to point out a few of them.. :3

1. I was sleep I was asleep

2. Vaste Lorde Vasto Lorde

3. who Gin and Tousen was who Gin and Tousen were

4. Grimmjow smiled, a very ear to ear smile, showing his too long canines and bright teeth Grimmjow smiled ear to ear, showing his sharp, long canines and bright teeth.

5. should'nt shouldn't

etc... :3

will he help i wonder?