Isn't a beta the person that checks spelling mistakes along with grammar? If so I would gladly be your beta for you. Also love how the story is going!

please up-date

MORE CHAPTERS PRETTY PLEASE WITH HOWEVER MANY OF YOUR FAVORITE TOPPINGS ON TOP XD

I really like this story! What's next? He has to go to school, then has to go to the market to buy food for Kyuubi, gets cornered by those bullies and they cause him to bleed, drawing out Vampire Sasuke cause it is late at night? Or the next day is Saturday and he has to go to the market, or someplace else and cause he has to take the long way around he ends up going home really really late and runs into Sasuke drinking someone's blood? Ohhhhh! I can't wait for the next chapter! And the whole beta thing, you can do a search for a betas and pick one out, I was lucky to read story by an author who was also a beta and willing to beta my story. If you can't find a beta, then I'm willing to read over it and edit it, even though I'm not a beta, PM me if you're interested! X)

I like this I hope you do more 3

please write more XD

write the next chapter! i feel so. . . . left hanging...

This is really good I cant wait to read what happens next! These people are so curle!

ME WANT MOAR! I love reading vampire stories especially if Sasuke is both the seme and the vampire and even though the storyline is cliche I love it too! Off to a good start and can't wait to see what else you got in store.

Www poor Naruto. Great chapter. Please update soon.

This is a pretty good start. Keep going.

Hummmm! Yep! I pretty sure that this story can becoma a great one later! But for the moment, you still have some stuff to take care of, such as some little mistakes in your way to express yourself (if you can find a beta, he/she 'll help you with this), and try also to not always reppeat 'Naruto': try to use other nouns such as 'the blond', or , you know, stuff like this.

But still, I'm looking forward for the next chapter! ;)

Gambare kudasai!

Omg I loved it! This story has true potential!

Keep up the good work an cant wait to see how the plot will develop!

So far loving the chapter very much and super excited for the future of this story :). Ahhh I'm not sure how beta works either...I think it tells you on your account that says 'beta reader'

Kyahh! Kyuubi is a fox x3 3!