Wow. I'm really impressed, this fic seems so simple and short, but yet have a deep meaning. made me fall deep in thought after the last lines, well done ! I love it very much :)

I really like this story :'D keep the good work up !

I like it. Its different, not the usual stuff you ordinarily read. Although, at the start, please specify what point of view its in. However, props for making it obvious in the storyline. Good job. Keep writing.