your description is weird. what do you mean 'what IF this poem was based on something tragic"? And what do you mean that YOU based it off the black plague? The nursery rhyme was ALWAYS based on something tragic. and that WAS the black plague. I'm not sure if you were kidding but it lacks any humor if you were so *shrug* There's nothing funny about taking creative credit you don't deserve... also black plague and chipmunks goes together like pickles and ice cream... weird...

LOL, "Because you're a nerd like us." "Oh... right..." XD That conversation/argument with you, Simon, and Jeanett was a funny little piece of entertainment, and this was REALLY good story; I'm gonna go read the sequel now XD LOL.

Okay, sweet but unexpected. I can't believe Jeanette's sisters ad Miss Miller (as well as the town) are being so stupid! Simon isn't crazy or a wacko freak! (And LOL at that "love birds (or love chipmunks)" part XD.

Okay, her family has officially gone nuts, as well as the town. LOL, I can TOALLY just SEE Jeanette saying that LO-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-ONG explanation about Simon to the idiots who were doing a stupid ritual on him XD. And his thoughts were funny. ;) Nice work!

Okay, that was sweet until Britt acted like a total MANIAC and put us on a cliffhanger, LOL XD. Nice work! :)

Aw, "Daddy there's an angel-girl in my class!" SO CUTE! :) LOL. That almost doesn't sound like SImon, but I can totally see a little tiny Simon saying that to Dave, ;) And more brother-love... LOL, "We just heard a hog snoring. He ran off." XD Nice work! :)

Okay, that was interesting (and those weird nicknames were HILARIOUS, LOL XD) And can't wait to see Simon's disguise (although as soon as I'm done typing this I can read it, LOL ;) XD) And that TOTALLY seems like how Simon would treat kids and stuff, nice but make them be all proper or whatever, but also being very sweet to them. :)

Nice work, and it's oak that it's short; that was funny. It's funny how when you adapted that story that you even made him talk all English-y and stuff XD (Like using "bloody")

Aw, brother sweetness, LOL XD (And yeah it does seem a little more fitting for SImon to be the oldest, considering his height and where this story looks like it's going.) How can people be SO rumor-ous as to say Simon's a crazy hermit; WOW. People. Are. CRAZY! And he's still himself and their personalities are definitely intact, so nice work!

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I'm a fan of the writer Emma zippy 577 and to Simon and Jeanette. Emma Z. is a very talented writer, and she deserves credit. So, this review is in honor of her;)

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aww-some story, and I will keep my eyes peeled for the next story!;)

ooh! ooh! another one! yay!

PS-french fry's rok.

glee-goodness! another one! i'm in heaven! :D please update it fast!;) i can't wait to read it!

OH MY FISHSTIX! YOUR MAKING A SQUEAKQUEL! XD lol, i'll be on the lookout!:D:D:D!

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cutest ending ever! XD I just saw that you updated, soooo, i clicked on the name, and I read thru this adorable story:) kudos to you:)