I remember reading this once a long time ago, back when it was brand new! I remember reading a bunch of Elder Scrolls FanFics, but yours always stood out. I'm eager to read it again, and I'll be happy to review it as a whole! But I figured I'd review the first chapter after feeling all nostalgic! I love the format of your work and I cannot wait to see how it grows over the course of your stories!

Second time reading this story man, so good I had to leave another review before I move on to the next book.

Not bad Jon. Fought off quite a few attackers there.

Poor Jon...

Lol you use the same thing that Game of Thrones good, nice thinking lad

Lol

"I will not authorise any gain on its behalf" : Of course he doesn't, Ulfric think himself Talos reincarned and he doesn't like rivals even the Dragonborn must be under his control, fucking asshole Stormcloak racist bastard.

I liked that you wrote this chapter from Delphine's point of view. But I don't know why you did it. It doesn't add a unique viewpoint at all. It just kind of baffles me as to why you had the exchange between Jon and Alduin be entirely in the dragon language, if the point of view for the chapter was that of a character who couldn't understand it.

Ohhhhh I like where this is going.

Good, but only the dragons (in the game at least) mix dovazuhl with english, humans dont. Not even the greybeards

Great

Good job, i like Tullius perspective, hope you do similar things later in the story

Good as always, allthough i wonder if youre meaning
Arngeir when he Said Ulfric lacked control

This is awesome, i am always looking for good roleplays of skyrim but had never really thought of fan fiction. Good job!

Beautiful story. I really appreciated it.

Well, couldn't he have said that Paarthurnax is already dead?