Thanks for writing! :)

This was just beautiful! You are truly, truly talented. Thank you for this!

Oooh my word. This was beauty beyond compare. The way you spin a phrase had me utterly gobsmacked from first sentence to last. I seriously felt like I was reading poetry. THANK YOU for such a fresh, and achingly lovely, take on the manga meeting of these two ill-fated lovers. I just love how you brought it all full circle at the end of this. What a gem!

I’m glad they decided to stay together.

Good job!

I realise this has been quite a day since this has been written, but truly, this is so inspiring it makes me wanna cry?
I love your style of writing in this, the way you use (or don't) dialogue, the way you subtly let their actions speak. Wonderful!
I bow to you!

Cute but still very eloquent

I want to compliment you on the choice to make the Dialog italics instead of quotes. It leads to a much more introspective feel and matches the tone of the story perfectly.

Very very cute! I loved it

Very well written. Poignant. The word love itself was not part of Usagi's thoughts in here but her and Mamoru's slowly developing feelings were evident with every scene.

I'm watching SM Crystal at the moment (as many of us must be) & I've gotta say, this story fits so perfectly with how they are portraying Usagi & Mamoru's relationship. By that I mean the way they are falling in love, the looks, the subtle touches, the way they speak to each other. Your story came way before Crystal but it ties in seemlessly. I think that's very cool :)

That was sweet! Very well written.

Gave me chills...great story!

This was beautiful.

Wonderful.