what? this is the end? i want more...theres much space for more ;)
this Story was really nice gj

yeah it should :) but...whats actually with the foretressvillage? dont know if its the right word)
gj nice part :)

hmm...my favourite weapon is the pepe-sword and another shield as the cosmoshield i dont have...
a very good part :)

i think ur right :) this is good for an intro

Awesome

What happened? I didn't notice anything about him being knocked out...

you could make a m–rated romance between rallenxjeena

OMG! THAT WAS COMPLETELY ADORABLE! :D

I honestly loved the fact you were able to put them in a romantic situation without making them out of character. You did a really nice job

very good the fic is awesome and super romantic