this is pretty *-* pls update :D

Umm... UPDATE!

GREAT cliffhanger. I love this Peeta you're writing that actually struggles AND that's actually going to hold Katniss accountable for some of the damage she's done to him. A lot of other writers seem to want to gloss over that.

Oooh. All I can say is that I REALLY like your Peeta. I know there were only a few seconds of him but I liked that he was not a) completely fine and just filled with love and support for Katniss or b) completely tortured and angsty and angry at the world. These seem to be the two directions everyone is going with Peeta after Mockingjay, but it's so much more complicated than either of those binaries. He's complicated (and cute).