:D i like this story, personally. u should make more like it! 3

I loved it! I must admit I'm sad to watch it come to an end but this was what had to happen! I'm in live with your work and hope to see you write more soon

When you said they saw David Bowie this was me :O and then when Jareth and him said "Ewww." I started laughing. I have never read David and Jareth meet so that was kinda cool. I'm sad it's over, but it was a pleasure to read so thank you for writing! ;)

LOL.I'm trying to work on an essay and I almost gave myself away reading this. I FELL OFF MY CHAIR!

Nice work! Good ending, matched the rest.

And I feel really bad for Tibby and a little miffed no one else cared about poor Tibby.

OMG... Was I pushy? Well I got a story out of you! (actually I see my pushiness now that you mention it) LOL

Anyway on to you and your story... I loved it. Jareth managed to upset me once but other than that I adored every word you wrote and Im glad you wrote it so fast. As for my pushiness, it will continue as long as there is a story I really like and need updates so in the event of you missing me (gives a self confident smile) please write some more and I promise to be the pain on the ass that I'm sure I have been throughout the journey of this story LOLLL...

Please update the epilouge soon!

Hahahah, all daddies plan to love their daughters more than the mother. That is such a pet peeve of mine. Maybe because I've never been a mother. I wouldn't understand.

But really, it makes me feel like the host for some man's personal amusement and gratification.

Still I bet those two were joking and Sarah understood what he meant.

It's sweet when he puts his face in her hair and takes her by the shoulders.

Very nice work, I've been reading the other chapters but without much internet so couldn't always review as well as I'd liked.

Now we're talking... I love Bowie and I'm glad Jareth was excited too. Luv them both and that was an awesome chapter... Hope to read more soon

Hah hah that's cute he got her pregnant!

I guessed ages ago! Seeeeee see toldya she was pregnant... And what an evil cliffhanger :(

I am totally loving your story so please update soon

Ha! Told you! Sorry, I didn't nessascaryily tell you cuz your the author and can do whatever you want, but I called it! Just kidding. ;)

Is she pregnant? Cravings,peeing... That gotta mean something right? And Jareth is such a push over ) can't complain though!

hhhhhhhhhhmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Pregnant? Maybe. I don't know much about it other than you get sick in the morning and a fat stomach... and cranky. Oh well, I'll find out. ;)

I don't know how 'pleasant' that surprise was. :) Oh! And I LOVED how Jareth read Harry Potter last chapter! ;)

Hahahaha...that was the best chapter yet. They are both so mean to her! Loved it. Please update soon