Loki is incapable of any good emotions

Why is Loki angry at being chained up? Did he really not think people would be against his murders and evil actions? Consequences exist.

Loki Chalemet. "Love My Way." And Thor.

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this is amazing

you must be that pervert in the white van that steals children to rape them. are you gay? and why did you have to write this creepy weird s**t about my beautiful son and his adopted oaf brother. seriously. you mortals are so weird. you must have a small mind. and a giant dictionary. how about i find where you live and give my tail blade your neck? the people who read this rather...sexually pleasing fanfiction must also be perverted white van drivers.

I love this story! It's everything I want in a Thorki fanfiction wrapped in one!

I loved it truly. The characters were built and portrayed beautifully. The relation was such push and pull, it hurt sometimes. I feel this is how each of the characters WOULD be. If only Odin was as kind as he was portrayed here, then from the movies/stories.

Anyways, I would recommend this fic, to all 'Thor/Loki' shippers. 10/10 would recommend.

I found your story yesterday and I truly loved it. Thank you for not letting anyone be raped and showing a loving Odin that does not appear in Canon or Norse legend. I wish Odin had loved Loki that deeply and really apologized to him. I will look forward to reading more Loki stories in the future from you.

The msystery to why thor feeel terrible in morning, a dull pain on his face.

"I had to punch you in the jaw to cease the cacophonous sounds."

Lol mystery solved, loki punch thor to stop him from snoring so he can sleep in peace.

Btw, i like how loki describe of what he see when he reach down and in to the prison.

The smell, physical implication of pain, and then to defilment.

Yes, i find it strange that the guard still hard enough or arouse enough to defile them with scent of old blood, urine and feces in the air ( problably sight of themm too)

Hey, probably that what flow the ship for fargo and some of the guard.

Still, they should have a clean room and wash the prisoners before the sexual violation
For prevention of worker's injuries and hardazd ( avoid infection and spread of disease)

Then again, maybe it doesnt matter unlike we human, they are asgardian so maybe they dont get sick like we do. But still wash that arse and pen.

This is good. Smack-talking loki acting like he is in control, being all cocky stoking thor thigh and assume thar thor want to defile him,deep inside he fear for that.

AWWWW! Thank you for this.

Although I may not be a thorki huge fan, I must say, this fan fic, was truly one of the best I have ever read, amazing and the passion and positives and negatives, you arranged them so we like a true author, which you are. (applause) I would truly love another sequel, hope you never stop, this fan fic may be old but I'll keep reading it. :)
Mizra

I love this! I first read it maybe a month ago but I couldn't help but read it again. I love how you use a common enemy to reunite them and allow Loki to prove himself. I love that you take Odin being a complete bastard and even use that to show the similarities between him and Loki, instead of Loki just being an outcast.

The way you build on Thor & Loki's relationship is beautiful, always that push and pull. I love how Thor surprises Loki by not giving in straight away and how they both get manipulated by each other and those around them, it kept it interesting. And the Thorki loving was hot as Hel! P

Oh my goodness, I luuuuuuuvd this story! What an exciting ride. And the happy ending was wonderful. Thanks so much for posting it :)