i love this

i miss this story

OMG, I absolutely love this story. Please update soon, the feels I have for them is to much.

OMG! You're back! I sooooo fucking love you man don't go away again :"( , the chapter is really good , your fiction is amazing I hope you keep it alive

I'm so glad you didn't drop this story.
And such a good chapter! Now I'm curious about Sokka's earlier days in Republic City XD

feeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeels

Love this story.

You're back! !
Finally I love you dude this fiction "sniff " is so great

I'm so glad you updated! Love the rewrite, and I look forward to the next one :)

Thank you for the update! It's been too long T.T

Amazing. You're extremely talented.

On a scale of one to Joseph Stalin, how dead is this fic?

Okay so I reread my last review and I think it may have sounded really rude so I'm gonna rephrase it..

I REALLY REALLY REALLY love this fic. I read it yesterday and then again today. Your characterizations are literally spot on. A lot of people say that Sokka would never cheat of Suki with Toph or anyone else but with the way the creators have taken LoK, you can see our heroes were still human and had flaws. And I love how you made this older toph and older sokka. I love how you made Toph strong but also vulnerable in front of people who know her too well... I got to this fic after you took down the chapters for revision so I really hope that you put them back up again after they're revised. It's really really good. There's so much emotion in each sentence that there are parts that I want to cry and I've only read 4 chapters! I can't wait for when they go up and you're a very very talented writer.

Wuh... I really like this fic and it just ended

Are you gonna finish it? It's so amazing. I don't usually read angsty stuff but this is literally the excpetion. Please please finish it :)

cant wait for the rewrite! last chapter was good.