Please let me beta this story for you!
I can't enjoy reading it without correcting all the mistakes in my head, so I might as well do it on paper/ word and help other people enjoy this story even more.

Actually, before can actually become a doctor, they have to go through 4 years of University in Life Sciences (or a related program of that sort), then 4 years of Medical School. Then after graduating Medical School, they have to complete a residency period which takes about 2-4 years on average. During this residency, medical students gain the experience they need to become fully licensed medical practitioners by working in hospitals, clinics, etc.

OH MY ENEL!
So kyut, so loving, so adorable, so hooot!
I was listening to I Thought I Lost You by Miley Cyrus, Try Everything by Shakira, and Breakaway by Kelly Clarkson while reading this awesome oneshot! Sequeĺ pwetty pweaase

This was cute and reminded me of a drama I watched years ago
Keep on the writes

Is this fanfic really your first time?.beacause the story really good with romance and some comedy/humor,and thanks for to completing the good work

This review is long overdue because I loved this fic so much, I saved a copy of this for me to read offline. And that was before put that feature where you can't highlight the words from fics to copy.

I really felt like hoping along with them as well as pining for the two to be together in the end. I like how Law remained in character - in the sense that he was still a cruel bastard except for Luffy. I think this is written beautifully and if this is your first fic - wow!

Anyway, great story and I'm looking forward to what you'll be writing in the future, if ever.

This fanfic makes my heart ache each time I read it. Yes, I have saved an offline version of this story on my phone eons ago so I can read it whenever I feel like it. That's how good this fic is, at least, for me. But I'm pretty sure there's a lot of us who share the same sentiment. Thanks for writing this!

25,359 words!
How can you write a chapter so long?!
Did someone chalenge you to do this?

I can never write that long...

This one shot was beautiful and really enjoyable despite the errors. The storyline was good and I was completely hooked. I'm glad I came across it. Well done and thank you for putting in the effort to create this short story, it was a true pleasure to read

Wahh, amazing! LuffyxLaw, Ima ship that for a long time now XD Love the story you should write more! Also, instead of writing all at once, use some chapters Irritate the readers with cliffhangers! We'll just get off the edge of dying when you upload another chap. LOVE YOUU! MWAH 3

You know, when you mention in the story of Eustass kidd trying to look for Luffy besides Law , I would have thought that there will be some Love triangle and stuff even a "square Love" if Zoro is included. But I really LOVE the story and keep up the good work -

Interesting read.

Some observations:

-There are some errors and repetition of sentences here and there, but that's still OK.
-You write fine, but some paragraphs repeat the same point more than once; being so explicit in the explanations is not necessary. For example, instead of saying everything you did about Shank's hair, you could have just said his hair color makes him memorable.
-You already noticed they're slightly OOC. Mostly, Luffy, but it's acceptable. It would have been better, however, if you tried to make her more stubborn; she felt somewhat tame. Rather than just mention how she's done mischief, I would have liked to read about her craziest pranks (the one about the candies doesn't sound particularly crazy) to know how come everyone agrees on Luffy's crazyness.
-It would have also been better to pay more attention to her nakama. Only Zoro plays a key role in the story. The others felt rather neglected. Even if it was a short story, a small POV contributing narration from each would have been very good.
-I could tell that both characters were new to love, but the transition from their friendship to love of their feelings is not shown. It is simply stated by the narrator. Which is fine, but including it would have really been a good addition. I can't help but wonder what thought or event in specific made Law realize he loved her, and how come Luffy fell for him too, what she felt when she realized this, etc. It would have been very rich.

Btw, what was Luffy majoring in?

Awww I love it! I like how you write Law's character, I can see it happening in real life. I don't know why but the first thing that came across my mind who the blonde nurse is that Impel Down guard who did the body check on Hancock lol xD
Who is the nurse? :D

awwwwww that was so sweet of law. they do make a cute couple. and its just me but ... ABOUT TIME HE DID THAT. good story.