Uhm.. just haveto point out it's a little difficult to understand. The grammar in your oneshot is very obscure and it's hard for me reado smoothly... but other than that, it was cute. Very cute.

Interesting scene- the first encounter of Scar and Simba. Seems that the two brothers already cooled down a bit from their recent argument, huh? One of those hope-bringing scenarios, too bad it didn’t turn out so peaceful…

If I am to make a judgment, I think you should pay a little more attention to your writing. It shows that this little story was written in quite a hurry, maybe even in one big rush of inspiration. That’s a good thing- it shows that you enjoy writing, but now you might want to work on making it more enjoyable to your readers. You still left quite a few spelling and linguistic mistakes, some word repetitions and such. Also the narration in the present tense and multiple complex sentences are a bit confusing. Whenever I write something, before publishing, I give it a few days and then read it all as if it wasn’t my own work- this way I usually catch all the errors.

So keep up the good work- with a little polishing you’ll have a horde of readers in no-time!

Cute and slightly sad.

Very very well done! It was advised to me that i should check your stories out. I really love your descriptive language. If only things between those two hadn't gone so sour...