*whines* There are too many well written stories that are left unfinished. Too. Many.

Write on.!
~Yuna

EH IDEAS? sorry caps lock was on. I dunno, maybe Sollux could run into Eridan by accident right after he was ditched yet again and he is crying, so Sollux helps of or whaever? I don't know man. I just know it would be pity for this to get unfinished.

*coughcough*moreplease*coughcough*

Hmm, it's interesting to see how Sollux manages to relate himself to Eridan in different ways.

Im really digging this story hope your write more soon cant wait to read what happen next!

It's a good thing I synced all of my fics; seems like I missed this one during an update! Chapter 3 alerted me to the mishap though, so that's exciting!

I like the concept right now (still); kind of like a modern day Homestuck version of My Fair Lady. There are a few spelling errors and what not (could be personal choice to spell Feferi as Fefferi?) but the story line itself so far is sound. You get a real good feel for the way the two are hurting.

Since you asked, the only suggestions that I really have is to not let Eridan know blatantly that Sollux's goal is, technically, manipulation. If/when he finds out though, you have a really good opportunity for some angst and anger, at the audacity that Sollux was so arrogant to think that he could fix the high and mighty Eridan. It would show a little more of Eridan's old personality showing back up too, so maybe a little crowning moment of "oh holy crap, I think I'm getting better after all" and all that.

Don't worry about the writer's block! It happens to the best of us.

I look forward to more from you in the future. :3

I'm really digging the feel of this fic. It's definitely intersting! Information is to the point but dramatic, and does a good job of keeping my attention. I cannot wait to see where it goes from here.