oh, the feels... Lol'ed at the angry pigeon. But i really liked the angst ang my heart broke for Hikaru walking home in the rain. :)

I love it

Awwww

you write so beautifully, this is probably one of the best stories ive read. 3

Really enjoyed this story, please expand on this plot!

That is just sad. I hate haruhi. Hikaru why can't you love kaoru forever? I loved this story, everyone was in character.

That was beautiful!

Aww so sweet.

I really liked this story and your form of writing. I think you did great and this pairing is just awesome. :)

I absolutely adored this. C: It was quite the read!

I think the two things that I enjoyed most was the fact that the two weren't all "Oh no, my love, I can't go on anymore knowing you'll never love me back and that everything about our brotherly love is forbidden, desu!" and that you write so neatly. c:

very well done

Awww

This is great! The emotions in this story are really spot on. I'm not the biggest Hikaru fan usually, but you made it easy to identify with him, good job!

AMG AWESOME SAUCE.

I really liked this story. all the emostions they were feeling i could sence the same thing, it was really good. Keep it up.