Omg this was undoubtedly one of the best Mihawk stories I've ever read. i had to stop myself because I'd read it before going to bed and I knew I needed to sleep, lol, but it was amazing! Your writing is wonderful, and I hope to see that sequel someday soon, I'm definitely looking forward to it!

what the.. MIHAWK! SHE'S YOUR CHILD!
HOW CAN YOU JUST ABANDON HERR!?
SHE'S A MEMENTO OF LILY YOU FOOLLL
YOU COULD'VE PROTECT HERR
NOW SHE'S OUT THERE SOMEWHERE BECOMING A BAD GUY(/GIRL?)
but anyway i so so so so so love your story
it was so heartwrenching when lily died and how it affect mihawk so much
i wish that lily is not dead
and i cant help that i'm still hoping n
that lily isnt deadanyway keep up the good work!

Love your story and can't wait to see what happens next so I hope you update again soon plz

Oh wow you finally updated; thank you so very much! I loved the emotion that you conveyed in this chapter, especially that last bit with Mihawk listing off the little things he loves about Lily. It's so realistic and touching. Once again, I can't thank you enough for updating.

I love this story so much and Im so happy you are updating again. I kinda figures she was pregnant but I didnt think she would die D:

You finally updated :D! I'll wait for 3 more years if I have to!

Please keep going. This story is fantastic!

This story is incredible. I love your writing style and the way you depict Mihawk. Lily is a wonderful OC. Thank you for your work

Very good

This is one of my favorite stories on here! I would greatly appreciate if you'd update eventually. I am dying to know what happens next .

Please continue this story!

"the short black hairs covered the base and amusingly enough it was shaven angularly just like his sideburns."

I can totaly believe that. :3

I quite like your mind...

Awww, so cute! Especially the last sentence, lonely huh. ! The girl is soooo cute, and I love how innocent she is.

Please please please update pleeeeeaaaaasssseeeeeee