:) I enjoyed this little read, despite knowing almost nothing about the games characters. You've been such a lovely reviewer that I really wanted to come see what your stories are like. I realise you wrote this a while ago, and not sure how long ago you re-wrote it, but I liked it. I enjoyed hearing the thoughts of both the main characters and the little scene between them. The bit I like most would probably actually be from the start to the middle though; it flows really nicely. This felt more like a chapter of a longer story to me, so I was glad to read you also wrote a sequel, haha. Anyway, great work! .

Awww it was good :) I love me some tsundere XD

Nice! Now I wanna read the sequel!

Ahhh, I really wanna see the sequel soon. This is amazing and well written... Although I don't think Jamie would dare shake her hand, heehee. That's not too important if you think, though. I love it very much and... I'm not sure what to say because I'm in a rush but eeeeeeeh feels

This was actually very good.
It's lighthearted, but there's a lot of reflection on their feelings.
But when he said she wouldn't "win" against him in farming, I expected her to be like, "...There's a contest?" But then again, she isn't totally clueless.
Lol I might favorite this.

LOL U got the inside joke. It's what Jamie says at the Harvest Goddess Festival, right? OH, and you might not have mentioned it (or even noticed it yourself) but the 'Stupid, stupid, stupid' line Jamie says reminds me of his reaction to when you try to propose to him and you don't have the required amount of notes xD. This is really good, I like how you made Jamie a little more eccentric in this, I couldn't stand if he was just still-faced, it'd be so boring.

~I'll most definitely look for the sequel ;)

This was extraordinarily well written and very itneresting to read. I enjoyed it a lot. My only gripe is that you describe their characters in the summary. Classic example of "Show, don't tell." Other than that,. fantastic. Looking forward to more and reviewing future chapters