This is a fantastic series. Brilliant rework of familiar events, and soooo much better than what RTD did.

If the bullet hit the subclavian artery, he'd bleed out internally...time it would take would depend on how badly damaged the artery was.

Ouch...Gwen not paying her taxes? Yikes, if that happened in my state the IRS would be all over her in the first few month O.O

Great verse! I'm really liking it!

I love this story. Thanks so much. :)

Your version of COE makes SO much more sense! LOVE IT! Moving on to Fragile Dreams...

As I am definitely of age (as in a dirty old lady, LOL!) I hopped over to your LiveJournal account to read these in full. Loved them again!

I've read some of this before on your LiveJournal. I'm glad to see you've posted it here so I can reread the whole thing. Love it!

This is absolutely Fantastic

I hope to read more of this, it is very well done!

Love it please update.

Good work

Love this chapter; how Ianto took care of Jack and asked him to move in.

Gwen, sweetie, NO ONE is above taxes, not even Torchwood.

Great update!

Interesting threads to the story. Gwen behaving selfishly as usual, rushing to Jack's side when she should be at Rhys' side. Hard to have any positive feelings about Gwen's character in your story; you've painted her ugly although I feel you've just added more detail to the character the original writers created ... a deceitful, treacherous slut with a bitchy nature to boot, lol.

Good lord I just want to slap Gwen. What a b!tch. Good think Jack put her in her place. Can't want to see what Rhys has planned for her. Great job.

wow, I really love this idea, and so far it's been written very well :)

I hope there will be an another chapter soon :)