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Absolutely wonderful story! I really loved it, and the both felt very real and true to their characters:)

This is amazing!

This story is actually the first how M'gann had first meet J'onn that ive read and i really enjoyed it awsome job :D

I love it, but M'gann really is J'onn's niece, her mom is J'onn sister, the story looks like he was just adopted her as his niece... That was also cool

Amazing work. Brilliantly captures the spirit of M'gann and the young justice show. I also like the depiction of J'onn. Really enjoyable especially if you like the show.

So beautiful... Makes me want to write something about M'gann.

I loved this book! I have been looking for one with M'gann and J'onn for sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo long! Thank you so much for writing this please write more!

This is the cutest thing I have ever read. The emotion in it is incredible, I am giddy with excitement over earth and I have been here my whole life (lol) but seriously, I am very surprised your stories do not have more reviews, they are very well written and super addictive. Ah, so so cute, I just want to hug something, hug M'gann,s he's so adorable. I love it that he shared some cookies with her, how thoughtful! And he's usually the one who does not want to share those! So precious! Ha! and and in all this, J'onn forgot to tell her that humans don't communicate through a mind link-lol xD
seriously though, I feel as though I am about to watch a movie I've been waiting a long time to see, or about to ride a good roller coaster. This M'gann excitement is certainly contagious!
Good Job!

Wow, its all I can say. I enjoyed this story so much, I jsut loved the interactions in this. You deserve more reviews then you're getting with this story. I hope this helps and keep up the good work!

I just found this and I really like the bond that formed.

This is a beautiful piece of work. I absolutely adore M'gann in the first season and I wish that she'd kept her innocence. I love your portrayal of her in this story and I adored J'on for accepting her and not being judgemental. You really do deserve more reviews than what you have, so I hope this helps and makes you feel good. :)

Loved it! Wonderfully written!

I loved this. It was incredibly sweet, and wonderfully written. You had a gentle humor throughout, and an impeccable taste with how to us their form of communication. well done.

What a lovely piece. It's a beautiful, in depth look at a character so often neglected in fanfiction. (Robin, Artemis, and KF tend to hog a lot of stories lol)

I would love to hear more of your writing. :)