gatsuga is fang over fang

Really interesting, no to check out the rewrite!

I loved it! Please continue to make more amazing stories for me to read! I look forward to reading more of what you've already written.

Too many Japanese terms! what are you doing? writing in Japanese or English.

(Please ignore the above, its just one of my personal annoyances with the community.)

While I do think that Sakura's screaming is played for laughs here, as a blind person I can tell you that loud things do affect me.

This is the reason why I stay away from the parties
with the loud music, because I already don't have eyes. when my ears become useless, I start to panic.

Sadly, when I tell this to a sighted person, reactions are either scoffing in disbelief, or outright apathy.

Wish the rewrite was further along. I really like the story

MORE SHIT HEAD And when do I appear fucking slow writer

Thank you

Please put the completed tag so as not to disappoint readers.

Hey, this was a little difficult to read for me. The reason being is you often repeat information you already told us. We understand that Naruto is blind and has been since he was 4. You don't need to keep repeating that. Also there's no need to keep saying that Naruto acts as if he has sight, we understood that very early on. Hope I helped.

Jūjin Taijutsu Ōgi: Gatsūga, Literally meaning: Beast Human Body Technique Secret Art: Fang Passing Fang)

Normals a setting on the washer

Actually, I read the whole thing. It was actually pretty interesting. I’m pretty sure that Sasuke becoming the homage was a joke since someone said that Sasuke shouldn’t be cracking jokes at a time like this expecailly with everyone’s reaction. Also, after the war it is revealed that Sasuke wants to get rid of the hokage and village to start a new one twords peace but Naruto fights him over it Andy wins so he backs down. I must have missed when Sakura said she wanted to be hokage. I will say I agree with MANY of the strange plots you pointed out like the relationships between Sasuke and naruto through the generations. And only they and madara and the first hokage (I forget his name, something starting with an H) are the reancarnations of the son’s of kaguya (forget their names too).

I really liked this, it made me laugh so many times. I would have liked to see everyones reactions to finding out Naruto is blind and who his parents were but i loved the story.

First of all, thank you for this wonderful story! It was a great read, fast paced and captivating. While it probably could be further filled out/embelished and lengthened through more details, it is not lacking in them. It actually feels like a full story, though the pacing is a bit off at some points(mainly as in some character developments coming a bit sudden) it's never so bad that it would take away from the plot and I'm very glad for that seeing how much I liked it. The ending certainly is open but stil satisfactory, at least to me. So thank you for leaving it up if I got this last nore right?
I really love any story with a competent Naruto, especially if seals are involved and it leads to team7 being a proper close-nit unit. Making him blind yet functional was great, I totally see that as possible with chacra. However, you had some slight mistakes as in his abilities fluctuated when it came to his surroundings. Just as an example: He henges the clone as Sasuke at the very beginning to help him get away from the fangirls, but then in the forest he can't? And you never did use that Kurama actually can see through his eyes. So it certainly could be polished. But it also is a great read as it is, and yes I am aware that I am rambling and contradicting myself. I just mean to say that yes, the plot carries the story despite the fact that the manner of telling it isn't perfect, but it isn't actually bad enough to drag the story down. I defenitely liked it.
I', gonna stop rambling now xD