Oh so sad... Was this like him viewing lacies memories?

This is really good, I love it. You have a good writing style and you should write more fanfics like this. Keep writing, I am going to add this to my favs. :)

Very well written, I really enjoyed it. :)

I love it, great writing and great mixing of simple writing and peppering verbs!

Wow... So tragic...

This was very good. The poetic nature of it really reminded me of Jack's character. Very well written.