This was magical. Love, love, love!

To the Guest below me: you need to improve your attitude.

This was excellent. A great idea and very well written! You dealt with the topic of fear really well.

i'm getting kind of tired you need to improve your fic quality woW

Love it X3

this blew me away. the depth of emotion, the description, Korra's thoughts and doubts were so unbelievably perfect. amazing job.

Right in the feelings. Wonderfully written. I really enjoy short fics like this that give us a window into scenes we can only imagine have happened.

Fantastic writing! Your prose was so beautiful and I felt as though it really captured the essence of a leaf in motion. It had lifts and bends and it curved and arced in beautiful patterns that made the whole story feel connected and complete. I love that you had Korra meditate on her own and we got to experience all of the intricacies of her sorting out her thoughts in an order that brought about clarity and hope. It felt so in tune with the series that I felt like it should have been in the actual episode as a closing scene. Amazing job!

...beautiful. I love the way you portray emotions. Love the story.

Really great fic!

You captured korra's emotions perfectly

Easily the best piece of fanfiction so far. It felt so intune with Episode 4-so real-that I had to remind myself that this was indeed fanfiction. Its filled with so much emotion and gave great understanding of Korra's inner turmoil. Your point that there is no bravery when their is no fear really played such a grea part in this. And the sign of hope, Aang is coming. This made me smile so much, giving that sense of nostalgia; it fits in so well with the animated storyline because we all now that Korra will indeed meet Aang. This brings up so much anticipation for what will come in the series and I think I love it more because of this.

~Vira

wow! that was really great, you illustrated Korra's feelings so well. Good job!

That was... absolutely beautiful. After such a dark episode this kind of light in the dark fic was exactly what I needed.

This is just so incredibly beautiful and insightful. It carried the same intensity that episode four did, but it was so different. It's just an excellent character piece. I feel like you've concluded Korra's journey, like this is the true ending to that episode.

Reading this piece was like meditating. I just feel that this work is saturated with layers, and meaning, and emotion, and understanding. It really is, I think, your best work.

Flameo, hotman.

Flameo.

This is absolutely gorgeous. I really think that this captures the depth that I think there is to Korra (I'm only saying 'I think' because the series hasn't really gone far enough to capture it, but there have been hints so it's there). Your prose was just lovely, and even if this was short, it's beautiful.

This... struck me, in just the right way. It was somehow very poetic and it... it really /fits./