Gah! This is so sad! I'm crying now! Dave! ;;

Past the emotional stuff, this is reall well written! Gog... It was so well written that I'm literally bawling my eyes out right now... *rolls off to sob in corner*

That's was super cute and sad. It really makes me want to draw haha. But totally, For your first fic, this is uber awesome. I liked it very much. If there were any grammatical or spelling errors, they didn't jump out at me like the usually do (for other people's writing, not mine...how unfair is that!) And yep...I've pretty much said all I can think of... good job!