Reviews for Visit to the Past
Guest chapter 35 . 7/22
update-yyy!
Guest chapter 11 . 7/21
I’m just saying this to get it off my chest.I went to the arch for a school trip,(longest six hours in a bus every),we get there and I’m freaking out like”omg Percy Jackson jumped off this holy shit omg” get to the top and I almost lost my shit for 2 reasons.

was no railing or anything of that sort ,it was a hall way with 20 windows,the size of Percy Jackson books,lined i the most uncomfortable and annoying spots.

Percy fell from the arch ,AS THE BOOK SAY,he would have been a Percy pancake ,because the arch is like 2 football fields away from the arch.

Fuck you,Rick
teamleov chapter 14 . 7/10
Athena, Poseidon, almost ? They do.
teamleov chapter 7 . 7/10
Oh
teamleov chapter 2 . 7/10
Doesn't Hades already know Nico
Guest chapter 28 . 7/5
I appreciate your attention to detail with having Thalia say "at least you got my eye color right this time" :)

Also, great story overall!
SarahOlivier chapter 13 . 6/11
Athena is very arrogant
Guest chapter 24 . 5/3
Nico should act like a child all the time, I hate how Nico was force to change from the cheerfully ten year old to a dead zombie person. It seems Nico never acts his age or childish
Guest chapter 5 . 7/19/2019
Hermes
Brianna chapter 35 . 4/12/2019
Please update I really want more please I freakin’ love this
Ross chapter 18 . 3/11/2019
Minor mistake. You said Argus instead of Chiron.
L chapter 19 . 2/4/2019
I feel like the way he talks is kind of unrealistic, like, in the books, those were his thoughts, so it’s okay, but if you actually say it out loud, it just seems strange, like it was a script or something, not him telling a story.
L chapter 12 . 2/4/2019
Nico... crying?
Anime Sword Weilder chapter 7 . 10/12/2018
Yes! Doctor Who!
Error 420 chapter 3 . 10/3/2018
YIU FORGOT SOLANGELOOO
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