Reviews for Hot Chocolate
Guest chapter 1 . 5/9/2018
Xd. I wonder if poor Superboy heard. And if so, did he know what was going on?
Guest chapter 1 . 2/25/2018
This was perfect. They are perfect
Guest chapter 1 . 2/19/2018
Amazing I absolutely loved it! Please make more thx! ️
The-Red-Lip chapter 1 . 11/26/2017
This was Adorkable.
Keep up the good work.
TheSailingShip chapter 1 . 7/13/2017
Loved the arrow pun.
Plushplushmcgush chapter 1 . 6/26/2017
The way that you write using such details make me feel as if I was one of them and I do t know if that's just for these people or for all of your writing but keep doing what you're doing, please
Goke Riffin3 chapter 1 . 9/13/2016
Loved it dude nice work! It would be a little funny to have a small side story of the feast of the Young Justice League heard all the noise those two were making. That would be too funny. Great work
Guest chapter 1 . 8/16/2016
Best thing I've ever read
Guest chapter 1 . 8/13/2016
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Cupcakecat127 chapter 1 . 6/6/2016
you should be arrested for writing such bad fanfiction:(
nookcakepop chapter 1 . 5/26/2016
Wow!
Jess chapter 1 . 4/3/2016
Love your fanfic! Please write more. I've shipped these two ever since Artemis first came on young justice.
restrictedcrayon chapter 1 . 2/1/2016
THAT WAS EXCELLENT! I love love love when Wally's thoughts and physical and emotional feelings are illuminated. And the various grunts and moans in sweet, perfect placement! You also share a sickeningly lovely-beautiful insight into a love-filled relationship, like in the thoughts they have in the different moments of sex. So sweet... I love seeing Wally love Artemis oh my god.
NICE WORK
Guest chapter 1 . 12/20/2015
you should do the other characters but if they don't have an love interest you could use somebody else not claimed
Spitfire Fan chapter 1 . 10/22/2015
I honestly love this so so much 3
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