nice! keep it coming

wheres the next chapter?

Good chapter, luv how u changed it up

Continue so I could read more plz

Awesome! I honestly didn't expect that coming! Haha! Keep updating!

I liked it! Haruhi probably would be in more control in things like that! Good job!

OMG your a tease and I love it so far can't wait to see more

Yeah I wanted dirty hope it get there :)

Good start really love your stuff lol

I like the story! ] I can't wait until the next chapter!

So yeah, if you haven't noticed by now I'm planning to review every single chapter! This story is off to an awesome start! Oh, just a suggestion: if you feel at all uncomfortable or weird about writing lemon in fics you could just ask a friend or even your readers to do it for you! That's what I'm going to do with my first fic! Great job on this chapter! Can't wait for an update!

Haha I agree! Tamaki should just suck it up and ask her out already! You're doing a great job for your first fanfiction! keep writing!

Nice intro! I'm liking it so far! Good job!

Oh I liked this chapter and can't wait to see what happens next it sounds like its off to a good start!

Well help it works can't wait to see what happens!