I feel that this chapter was massively out of character for Alex. He should have killed Taylor before Shepard even caught up, and once she did he should have killed him anyway. She holds nothing over him to make him stop - she respects the Justicar so much? That same justicar executed an unarmed prisoner THAT WAS HER DAUGHTER. You are making Shepard hate everything about Alex that she loves in other people. And even assuming Alex actually let the guy live, he never would have apologized like that. That would imply he was wrong - which he wasn't. And if Joker and Garrus threatened him, he wouldn't capitulate. He'd start breaking bones.
You're making Alex a massive pussy for no discernible reason.

A very interesting start to what promises to be a really good story. I have read quite a number of "FanFiction" stories, and many have been good. It looks like it will likely take a few chapters to get all your main characters and store line fleshed out, but with the hints provided I like where I see this going.

Thanks for sharing!

RIP Mr. Nibbles

You will always be remembered.

For what it's worth I liked this chapter.

It's a shame this won't be continued, but thank you for the read.

writing about Alex fucking Mercer, and you won't write 'fuck'... -.-'

Still a fun story so far. Good work.

I really enjoyed the story! It's a shame you won't be continuing, but I really appreciate you actually completing the ME2 arc. Thanks for the many hours of solid entertainment!

none of the mass he absorbs seems to effect him, but take one possessed collector and he is permanently stuck with whatever mod they have so reapers can talk to them

arnt all shields kinetic barriers? that would mean alex can cut through them all inc those of the geth. and where would he have encounterd geth? they didnt go to a lot of places during sarens time

if he absorbed a krogan and a krogan like rycoll then alex need onky but shift to a krogan and there would be no problem. i know this is prob more of a crack fic but its enoying how few stories truly grasp what he is and can do

if mr. nibbels was with her since saren then he should have died on normandy unless it is a real space hamster

why is alex not a biotic? seems like something blacklight would love for evolution

Hoping for hope that you'll come back and continue this fic! This was a very fun read !

Good story

Purple is the yayest color.