| Reviews for As If I Was Human |
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Envys-Kitty chapter 42 . 12/27/2018 Beautiful story. It was great and well written. |
K chapter 42 . 11/12/2017 Wow, okay, so that was still quite the fast ending. The sort-of proposal at the funeral was honestly not really my cup of tea. Not exactly fitting I'd say. But, moving on... This has been one hell of a ride. Again, totally different from what I was expecting but pretty interesting and enjoyable to read. You came up with a really cool plot idea and all the characters were written to their perfection. I also never thought I'd ever read a Clint fic but here I am and I don't regret it for a second. Great job. I caught myself wishing I could leave anonymous kudos like on AO3 on here as well but okay, than just see my comments as the thanks you deserve. Thanks for writing and sharing all this with us! |
K chapter 40 . 11/12/2017 I thought so. You confirmed that all of the team, of most, or some (whatever xD) were on Carter's side on this one, so I wasn't worried that Fury would or could be able to interfere. It's still a nice, special, little, strong moment we witness there. I loved that little exchange between Tony and Bruce. So powerful and meaningful. |
K chapter 39 . 11/12/2017 Wow, I seriously wasn't expecting that. Pretty intense. But I have to admit that I still also secretly love sad moments like this. It makes everything more realistic and emotional. And omg, Hulk is bottom-less . great, haha. On another note, nice work on the mission / fighting scenes again. I really liked it. Now onto the last chapters... |
K chapter 25 . 11/12/2017 Aww, Natasha. Always her with the hard exterior and when you know her enough and she lets her guard down around you you see that deep down she can be just nice. She was made that way. I write her well too. Just, what I said in the last comment, I'm not a 100% sure - but probably 98%. It's just, she's pretty hard to write I'd say. And for that you are doing a good job. |
K chapter 24 . 11/12/2017 That was awesome! The fight was really great! Like I said, the whole mission thing was awesomely written. And the characters as well. I'm not a 100% sure of Natasha but everybody is pretty damn well written. And that last sequence here... Phew |
K chapter 23 . 11/12/2017 I was waiting for something like this to happen on this mission. A little bit of drama, yaaay. I liked the mission itself and the constellation of the team a lot. And I guess her powers and suit are pretty damn cool as well. |
K chapter 20 . 11/12/2017 I SERIOUSLY love Tony! And the way you write him is incredible. I mean, I think it's perfect. And, yay, a suit - called it! ;) |
K chapter 17 . 11/11/2017 Of course Fury got Scherbatsky to tell her... Still funny. And sweet, kinda - when you consider all the little moments Agent Hill has had in which she's been "supporting" Clint and Carter. That's nice. And... Is Tony maybe, just MAYBE, making her a suit? An outfit? I just got the idea.. I don't even know. |
K chapter 16 . 11/11/2017 Fury.. Lol xD They are all so awesome, honestly. And yay for Steve's appearance! To be trained by Captain America... Honestly, is there anybody that would decline? I don't think I would. |
K chapter 15 . 11/11/2017 Okay, this is all happening very fast suddenly? Or maybe that's just me? Doesn't even matter that much, everybody is different, so. It's all cute and sweet and aww but just for me personally things are happening pretty damn fast since the last two chapters. Idk. I'll get over it, so no biggie. |
K chapter 13 . 11/11/2017 Wow, alrighty, I really wasn't expecting that anytime soon. At least not until a few more chapters into the future. But oh well. |
K chapter 12 . 11/11/2017 I freaking love Tony. And I'm really happy guys like Bruce and Natasha are making appearances in this story as well. |
K chapter 8 . 11/11/2017 I'm kinda really starting to like her. Also, the way you write Clint is perfect. For me, he is absolutely in-character. I like their interactions as well. And I absolutely love the length of the chapters so far, they are really nice and easy to read and if you need a break or can't go on for a while you don't have to stop in the middle of the chapter. I hate it when that happens and usually avoid it. Anyways, I'm still curious about her. I have a few ideas on my mind but we'll see... :) |
K chapter 6 . 11/11/2017 So she's some kind of super soldier lady..? Well, I'm curious to find out what happens now. This story is certainly completely different from what I was expecting. |