I like it so far, please update soon.

Awesome! Trying to figure out more about this point in the Targaryen Dynasty and this interpretation gives a clearer image. Although are you certain that she was born in 171AL?

new chapter please

Great story, I hope that one day we will have another chapter. Story of tragic love of Daemon and Daenerys - such a great subject and so small amount of fanfictions... I hope you wont give up and continue because it is truly awesome

Wow, I've been looking for a story like this! Just love Targaryen history, they are all incredibly fascinating and this particular period is so interesting!
You've done an amazing job writing each character and I really enjoyed seeing them as children. Love how you portrayed Naerys and the three sisters. The interaction between Daena, Rhaena and Elaena last chapter was perfect.
Can't wait to see how Daenerys and Daemon's relationship develops, think this is the first chaptered fic I've ever read of them! Thank you for sharing this story, hope you continue writing :)

Daenerys is so adorable! I am happy that someone focused on the Targaryens for once! Such an incredible family! I wish to see more of Daena in the future :))

This is fabulous I was always fascinating by Daena Targaryen :))

amazing story i love the way you portray House targaryen and seems very interesting to me the events that followed the blackfyre rebellion

Wow! Daenerys is fascinating and so are the boys. We only hear about their dramas and conflict as adults, so it' easy to forget that once, they must have been children who grew up together.

Kudos for you for writing like that, especially when English isn't your first language.

You did Rhaena! I never gave her much thought but I am glad you did. Three cheers for you. A very particular Targaryen, indeed. And Daena is both fascinating and nasty. Aegon... eeek! Don't like Aegon.

You seem to be up to a great start. Your characters are fascinating. Naerys is just the way I portray her, and so is Daeron. Thrilled to see that Daenerys Martell does get some first quality attention here!

I'm so glad there is a new chapter! I was just so excited when I saw someone had written a fic about this period!

I jut can't wait to see Daemon and Daenerys in love (and there love cursed, yeah I love tragic love story...). And more Daemon! (one of my fav character ), and Daemon and Daeron interaction (after all Doran Martell said at some point that Daemon was dear to Daeron).

Your story has hooked me

Anyway I really love how you portray Daena, it is quite how I imagined her (one of my fav, such a kind of tragic woman, if I remember well she died young...).

Can't wait for next chapter!

Beautiful!

This is amazing. The old Targaryens are my absolute favorite, especially the ones that lived during the Blackfyre Rebellion, and I'm always excited to see new fics about them, particularly well-written ones like this.

Naerys' lines towards the end were gorgeous and really stood out to me. "Fire and blood are our words. But what blood? It's now mixed with the Dornish, no longer untainted. What fire? There are no more dragons sailing the skies. What prevents the large houses to rebel against us and deprive us of all?" That was absolutely beautiful, and especially chilling given what happens to her house after Naerys' time.

This chapter is very well done, and I can't wait for the next one!