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update! please update! I wanna know what's gonna happen next. oh, and will Sai, haku and zabuza join the village too? what about the other jinchuuriki? like Yugito and Bee. or some of the akatsuki? like deidara and sasori. by this time should deidara still be a missing-nin or at the very least a part of iwagakure. oh! and what about idate, the little brother of ibiki?
man, there are still so many who could join them, I wonder who's gonna do that.
please update soon! pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease

Awesome please update soon :)

Its an interesting story, I enjoyed the writting...kinda. The plot has alot of holes in it, I can understand gaara and naruto being able to pass the genin exam early. What I dont really get is why you seem to have everyone just suddenly accept that narutos knows best and follow his every whim.

You have the jonin sensei just suddenly do what ever naruto wants, every thing is kinda just handed to him on a nice silver plater.

No one questions narutos sudden apearence in suna. You have a few different conflicting points, at one point you state that naruto wants the sandime to think hes dead, and yet he goes back and steals the forbidden scroll. Then you state that naruto knows enough about the jutsu in the scroll to have written somthing in it, and also be able to teach others about it.

Theres also the part about kankuro that I dont follow, you put a fair amount of time in to having him be part of the group, and then suddenly hes no longer there.

all in all I like the story, its good fluffy fun, but its kinda just like cotton candy.

can't wait for the next chapter :D

i like this story its pretty good but idk this last chapter was a little idk...hmm all i was thinking is

why would everyone agree to leave with a 6 year old even if he was strong they all just got up and left with a stranger and a group from another village

also now i think about it why did hinata agree to leave with a stranger back in like chapter 1 or 2 whichever it was... i mean i would understand if she left with naruto if she knew who he was and she wanted to be with him like in the manga/anime

and wont sakura say anything about Orochimaru they were saying how he is a S class missing nin from konoha and now hes travaling with them so wouldnt she say anything about him

there are more things i am curious about but just dont feel like writing a story about it all like a fully stocked village and other things but i will leave it at this

you got a good story going but just in this chapter all the way it all happened are just way to...

dont know how to even finish that sentence

UPDATE PLEASE!

wow this is great so far keep up the good work and update asap

sakura #3 gaara #1 naruto #4

this is a good story hope you update soon. First, Third question at the top of chapter 5 number 4, number 7 and for the Second question either number 1 or 3 but if number 2 wins then he would be like Kakashi in a way but only in the having one eye coverd of course but i hope he doesnt lose and eye.

Loving the story so far, can't wait for an update, although why would naruto and co. be doing the chuunin exams when they are jonin and the 'persuading' of members to join the village could have been a little more in depth, the way Hinata and Orochimaru was brought to the village was great.

However it was a little disapointing how little of a challenge Orochimaru was i mean he is an S-class ninja so either the enemies that attack the village are going to be in huge numbers or are going to be super powerful OC's with no integration into the story making them hard to like for example 'Mikan-sensei' who we know practically nothing about other than her name and the fact she is a jonin and is apparently the 'best taijutsu user in wind country.' although she doesn't really seem to show signs of being overpowered seeing as she was taken down by the main characters on two separate occasions.

What i'm trying to get across is, with god mode Naruto, you either need God mode OC's to match him, some twist with Naruto cannon characters which made them stronger, a huge amount of opponents to deal with his ridiculous amount of power, or the final option of fights not playing a major role in the story and the opponents that face our heroes in Sakura simply get dealt with without much hassle.

Now i see i'm ranting a lot on negatives which i didn't intend to do, hopefully it will be helpful instead of just seeming like a nasty flame because i really am enjoying the story so far.

The way you pulled in the three sannin to the village is great, and bringing orochimaru in was something i definitely did not expect and the first chapter was very well done, as well as the whole AU you have going on a lot of people overlook the fact that since the characters are a young age that they are pretty much OC's as really they are not gone into much in cannon, making pretty much the attitude, looks and general character different in most ways.

Another awesome thing is that so far the story hasn't clung to Cannon even a little, although some of the more notable events are welcomed like the chuunin exams as they can be easily changed to make a different impact on the story, for example Sakuragakure(?) could replace oto in the suna/oto attack on konoha although i doubt Naruto would want this, it could happen.

Hopefully soon we'll get a little more of life in Sakura, and with any luck Akatsuki won't show up or at least not as the main villians, as Naruto would have around another 6-9 years before they start moving and seeing as he defeated Orochimaru at 6 i doubt they'd do much good as enemies.

I hope this long review wasn't considered negative, tryed to make it nice and long, those one liner reviews can really suck and this has no where near the amount of reviews it deserves.

Thanks for the read!

MM.

for the 1st pole in chater 5 4 or 5 is fine with me. for the 2nd pole i say 3 and finnoly for th 3 pole i vote for 10 :) ps i think when tunada and juriya meat ouaremaru tunada kicks his gay snake ass to the moon and back 7 time and that anko and kasish should join there villge that just my thought.

sasuke

Ummmm, you're kidding me, right? Write more, you jerk! And, moreover, as some other immature people would say, GIMME MORE SCREENTIME! I love the writing, don't forget to write more,

Audi-Chan

naruto should fight sasuke