I liked it.

Aww...how cute! Even while being kind and gentle, this Jareth is completely believable.

That was adorable! Thanks for writing.

AWWWW, that is too cute.

They are so cute! :) I love this!

XDDDD Oh, that is just TOO cute! w I loved it! Even more so, when his daughter's name was revealed - that happens to me my name. -

Aww! So sweet! I love this softer side of Jareth, and yet it's perfectly believable! Made my day! x

That was just adorable... Truly cute and Jareth makes such a great father

Of course you on the other hand make a great author

I think since you're so good you should write a bunch of family fics with Sarah and jareth and their kid's life since you do it so well... And there arent many of those cute ones

Hope you consider my suggestion

Love... Lovejareth

That was so cute. Keep smiling. :-)

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww! SO cute, innocent, and adorable! I love it! ;)

That was so sweet! good story!