Strange I never knew about Rionna / if this is how Turaga Dume was knocked unconscious
No wonder they said Makuta did it secretly it's like Optimus V Megatron in the worst way ever
anyway, I'm a TRANSFORMERS fan so honestly, Bionicle really isn't my thing .

Oh. I thought those Gaelic names were just somewhat universe-fitting names. The fact that they have meanings makes it deeper.

I guess this was an okay read, but there's some grammar, punctuation, and setting issues. Like how you jumped from the beach toa corridor. Or that's how I read it. I dunno, you might have written something that I missed.

I can't stop reading! Very interesting take on the story, but I really like it!

Haha! The traslations!
Aaahaha! XD
*Deep breath* Hoobouy..

Question can you make all 4 movies of transformers with Mata Nui (from Bionicle: Legend Reborn) be Optimus Prime and some other good bionicles be autobots and bad bionicles be decepticons ( make a main bad Bionicle be Megatron), and can you make small bionicles be sam and mikeala? Can you pleeaassseee make it? :) that's a smiley face

Update immediately, please!

Okay whew! She's still alive. Sorry if this is short. Sociology has taken over much of my brain and my story has taken what's left. I'm going to bed for a while.

Huh? What just happened? Did Anuenue just...die? I'm getting a bit confused.

...*Takes deep Breath*YOU HAVE WON A Imaginary COOKIE! Happy noming!

Wait...Vakama and the other Turaga Metru are gone? How did this happen?!

I take it that Aikane accepted Tahu then? :)

It's good to see you again Kokua. :) I've been waiting. So,(glances at the story eagerly) what adventures are we in for this time?

Prolouge will beon the net tomarow

Nice part dude 40 min left until I can talk with PM

I got my Prologue in the network

Please Fav me and Follow me if you want

SUPER part !

I need someone to help me on my story

Hay nice part agian can't get away from this series of parts

can I change the time zone of my account?

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