I loved this story!

Really love this story

Tony wasn't really a probie actually as he already had years of field work experience mcgee hadn't had any that i know of before joining ncis

I love this story so much. I read it a couple of years ago but didn't have an account then so I couldn't save it and I have been searching for it for ages. So happy to have found it and be able to read it again.
You have done such a great job on it. So many parts that kept me on edge and made me not want to stop reading. I love Tony and Gibb's relationship, he's always there to take care of Tony when he needs it : )
Fantastic story!

Ziva always has to ruin things

"All in the same day" and this story were fucking awesome. I hate that it ended but so relieved how you ended it. I had to go back and reread a couple of things to understand something but other than that the flow was great and I was completely immersed in the story. Like I said...fucking awesome. This is favorite. I have read lots of NCIS fanfic but this was my favorite Tony/Gibbs story. Can I print this to reread whenever I want? I am so happy right now. I love Tony...thank you for this exciting, energetic, heartbreaking story. Gave me so many feels! The case was absolutely believable and engaging. Love this!

I just re-read this story, for me, one of my favourites and actually, don't mind the Englishisms, more over, I like them. It is a shame you don't write in this fandom anymore... I miss you

This story is good on several levels, the case, the Tony!whump, the emotional baggage, the tie-in with the episodes. Well done, thoroughly interesting, compelling, and entertaining. I do, however, think your writing would benefit from some commas, and a beta. Among the Englishisms that slip in here and there, there are misspellings, incorrect words, punctuation issues, and lack of commas needed to clarify sentences. Mostly minor (except for Mossard), but working with a beta would help raise your writing to a new level, I think. You put so much work into this very good story, that it deserves that extra attention. That said, I realize you wrote this a while ago.

P.S. i may be getting picky but remember that Ziva doesnt use contractions when she speaks so for it to be consistent with the show make sure Ziva wont use contractions

I love SWAK but of course Kate died in the next episode.
The thing is if Cote de pablo wants to come back then they can have an episode where Ziva comes back from mossad and blah,blah,blah but if sasha wants to come back we have the issue of Kate is dead,we can bring ziva back from isreal but we cant bring kate back from the if Sasha wants to come back then she cant.

Good old Gibbs ... he's not exactly very practiced at taking care of people is he? However ... I thought the end of the chapter was very cute and funny ...

I think that you've gotten Gibbs down perfectly. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.

Aww, Papa Bear Gibbs is out in full force. Ziva and McGee are in for a surprise.

I liked it! Poor Tony, I hope he feels better.

so good :) loved it :)