The moment I saw "are you lonely?" and "matamune" the tears began.
Really loved you story.

Cute! Like this!

I recognized the story pertaining to the contest instantly when I read the first few dialogues. :P You could still enter it to the contest or something.. just make it longer! :D I think you've written this well, so keep it up :)

I really liked it. It was short but sweet and nice. And don't worry about your english. In my opinion, this fic was written well. :)