Ooh
So nobodies the good guys here
Perfect, I do like a bit of spice

Oh dear

Ooft

Ah yes this story appears to have exactly what I need
Thank you

This fic is absolutely fantastic. The tale u spun is so captivating and extraordinary. Ur creativity is amazing. I am totally ur fan.

cornered by an experienced hunter XD

wasn't' expecting that

this is pretty interesting

It's funny how the past had such a huge affect on the present...

I wonder what Ash will find...

Such a fascinating ending. Too bad the story has to end so soon. Great job as usual and look forward for more of stories in the near future.

Tanya Adams 64

Intriguing. Thank you for the entertainment.

That was a satisfying ending, though I don;t think that last part needed to be labeled the epilogue, though it was separated by time from the rest of the chapters events. I like that fact that things start out mystical, but then the spirits all turn out to be pokemon, that was a nice twist. Also, since the ocean spirit was lugia, this thing did have something to do with legendary pokemon after all, I also like the idea of the vengeful spirits being absorbed by spiritomb and slowly passing on over time. The last comment from Ash (about Brock's sculptures of Lily) was a nice lighthearted way to end the story.

Great conclision! It does leave me wanting more (as its left open) but I suppose thats the nature of the story hey ;)!

I'll go man watching!

Hahah Pixel is awesome! :D!