Reviews for Chocoholic
LeoVargas chapter 5 . 6/6/2012
Another good story! Keep up the awesome work!
Hi chapter 5 . 5/11/2012
Your story was really cute. It's sad how Al addicted himself to the choco as a result of not having Arthur's love in return. I'm glad it worked out in the end. I thought it was hillarious when the teachers would get together and talk about the arguments Al and Arthur had in their class. That's the first i've seen that and am suprised it's not a common thing in ff's lol

However, i believe that it would have been better if Arthur didn't find out about Al's addiction to chocolate the first night at his house. But the way you wrote that scene made me saticfied with out it turned out. I mean, Arthur really wouldn't have stopped until he knew exactly what was going on.

Anyways i loved reading this! It made me laugh and caused a pain in my chest for Alfred :( Why would you do that to me?
Guest chapter 2 . 4/25/2012
I loved the part were he was on Google great story and keep up the good work!
Guest chapter 2 . 4/25/2012
I loved the part were he was on Google great story and keep up the good work!
PaperChild chapter 5 . 4/25/2012
Hi there~ )

I don't often review stories, but I found it sad that yours didn't have any feedback, so... It was a really cute story, and gosh, it made me laugh like crazy D Francis and the BTT, particularly, were priceless !

Oh, and by the way: "Give me a situation in this school I couldn't solve by shooting someone.". You totally had me there. So Vash~

So, awesome story, I hope I will hear from you again soon !

PS: I'd have liked more teachers' POV (to see some pairings more~), but that's okay ) Bye !