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   HetalianOtaku chapter 1 . 12/31/2016 You know what? I actually read this in a dark room at night. I'm not sleeping tonight, it Dec. 31, and you did really well for a first time. I don't have much criticism other than a little too much monologue, even though I know it's First person POV. I kinda want a sequel, but whatever. Great job, and keep up the good work, young one. *Master of darkness and dark stuff. Like rape. And murder. And POV of all kind* Hasta La Pasta, HetalianOtaku |
| Jian Yi chapter 1 . 12/6/2015 I feel... sad... but at the same time, happy, because you made a beautiful story. |
| Binnyford212 chapter 1 . 6/15/2015 I think you did a good job in this fanfiction? :) I loved the writing :) great job !;) |
| BigWhaleAndBlueBird chapter 1 . 5/27/2015 No matter how unsettling that was I almost cried at the sad ending. Poor Alfred. He's dead. Le Sigh. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/14/2015 This is amazing and well written |
| me hehe chapter 1 . 11/11/2014 ;-; Poor England... but America deserved it. thats what he gets for raping my precious Angleterre. |
| AvadaKazebra313 chapter 1 . 5/23/2014 Fuck...that's some deep water you got yourself into, Alfred! ;( |
| Funa chapter 1 . 5/20/2014 aw, i like it buut i have an idea if you want, you can do the same scene but from arthur |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/8/2014 Sooo, that was incredible. Loved it and very well written. |
| Maicera chapter 1 . 2/3/2014 It's very well written, but.. I'm not really affected, even though dark fics are totally my thing. Maybe it's cus I really can't envision America in that role. Too OOC, perhaps. XD |
| QueenDooter chapter 1 . 10/23/2013 Ma goodness gracious. That. Was. Dark. Just, well done. I get what you mean about reading it in a dark room. Poor Arthur, and even poor Alfred. That is some serious mental illness there, and seriously that was a well displayed state of what someone might be thinking- the way his thoughts are so detatched and nearly child-like, which also makes it all the more creepy. Good job, i guess... *heads off to cry in the emo corner* |
| kimi-ebi chapter 1 . 9/2/2013 It was weird to be in his mad mind, but well done and that's why I like it, even if it was horrible. Thank you for this one ! kimi-ebi |
| rAoMe chapter 1 . 4/11/2013 Well. Im just wondering...not to be creepy or anything...but is there going to be a second chapter to this...because it doesnt say complete... |
| Tassy Riddle chapter 1 . 3/30/2013 Awesome! O.O |
| SailorMikuMoon chapter 1 . 3/16/2013 Oh my god. This was disturbing at first (very much so), but then I felt so bad for Alfred at the end. Like, so bad, I felt like the plot twist is just because I feel so sympathetic. I think you reaaly pulled off the psychological aspect that the story presents. It was quite well written too, with no noticeable grammatical mistakes. Bravo, my dear! - It wasn't very romantic, but the original plot quite makes up for. A good read, my friend, a good read, |
