| Reviews for Peter Parker, the fifth brother |
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Kirjakissa91 chapter 48 . 5/27 I haven't read this in a long time. |
Guest chapter 53 . 2/9 When will you update and will villains like sandman, venom, lizard, electro, rhino, vulture, scorpion, shocker, mysterio, chameleon, kraven, and carnage appear |
dream lighting chapter 53 . 9/24/2019 Nice chapter keep going it’s getting interesting love it good cross over too |
Jasmine-Fox chapter 5 . 9/23/2019 Hamoto? is this a typo cause it's Hamato |
Guest chapter 27 . 6/1/2019 Where is the extended fight the paragraphs where a fight happens ends real fast you kneaded to fix the paragraphs there. |
Rakaan chapter 4 . 9/11/2018 I'm a bit disappointed and confused his webbing is biological; this story is in the "Animated Series" crossover, in which Peter designed the web fluid and shooters himself. His designing his own webbing was actually one of the main things that showed Peter's intelligence, and it also leaves the way open to tweak the design for different situations. With Don being there, I was expecting/hoping for them both to come up with neat web-variations not only for Peter, but for the turtles in general as a useful gadget with good utility. Biological webbing just doesn't have that. It's nowhere near enough to turn me off from the story, but it did make me a bit sad. It feels like you went with the Spider-Man movies bio-web just so there's a reason the turtles don't end up using web-gadgets. |
Juxshoa chapter 56 . 3/26/2018 I'm ready for some reading! |
BlackNeko13 chapter 56 . 3/26/2018 First I would like to say congrats on your son and I hope he stays healthy. Take your time in writing your next story. I know for sure that they will turn out great! |
bajy chapter 55 . 8/2/2017 Its okay, take as much time as you need, don't overstess yourself |
Juxshoa chapter 55 . 8/2/2017 I understand; take your time and we'll be waiting when you're ready! |
Darius Smith chapter 1 . 7/4/2017 I really love your work. Please continue :) |
Dark Yugi chapter 54 . 6/18/2017 Loved this story so much. Hope to see more soon. Keep up the awesomely amazingly wonderfully spectacularly great job. |
SonicBladeNinja6 chapter 1 . 4/13/2017 Despite their not being enough Spider-man segment, this is a really good mashup and it's really well told. I really do hope that you update the story. A thousand and one please update the story |
gwencarson126 chapter 54 . 9/12/2016 PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON |
Guest chapter 46 . 7/24/2016 I almost cried. |