This is Soo cool, I love how it panned out that he jus asks her out... There was no beating around the bush and denying it... It was quite refreshing actually :) in a good way too... So this story is REALLY good and I want to know what happens next so you need to updat soon!

Ok, now please post a real chapter

The chapter was good, but the add of the stand alone didnt mesh that well, and you might want to looka at the ages

good stuff

keep going

I loved this chapter and i hope you update soon

awesome start

waiting for next chapter