Is there more to this? Or is that everything. I do like the telling of this Tale

This is so great. I really hope you continue this story. I love the idea of a strong Belle, and i'm always looking for good fairytale land stories. This one happens to include both. I can't wait to see more. Until next time, Lolita Girl. Xoxo

This is such an amazing story, and truly unique. I hope you continue it soon

surprising! i can't wait to read more.
peace

So intriguing, I do hope you will continue to write. You are an exceptional author. Looking forward to more!

A VERY satisfying chapter! I like this Belle & Rumpelstiltskin was particularly malevolent. Pun intended!

This wonderful! Your twist on the storyline is fresh and fun. Keep up the good work!

This really is an amazing story ive probably said it before but I love your version of belle! and her interactions with rumple are all kinds of entertaining! Excellent chapter as always! Update soon!

You're truly excellent at rendering a clear picture of their swordplay. I love that she stole his clothes! And, "little glass vials" while entirely appropriate for Rumpel's needs was it also a Repo! Reference as well?

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I had been thinking the same: why not magic the beasties away? But that's a valid point you made. Very well done.

This is a rather interesting twist on the story. I like it!

I love your story, with this Belle, who's not afraid.

Nice one. You go Belle.

Now that I've finished my giggle fit, I can leave you a review.

I love this! Belle has always been brave, but you've taken it a step farther and made her a warrior. Wonderful! I love the banter you have going on and how you've tweeked the OUAT storyline to fit your idea.

Two thumbs up and I can't wait to read more!

This is truely a well written story! Please continue soon!